GnomeSlice's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper Flower]

What he said..

Pretty much exactly what Gravey1 said, though I'm too lazy to write a full review myself. The fact that I even bothered to write this should tell you something though! 5/5!

Aeris responds:

haha thank you kindly :D

[what runs in your mind? 2]

Whoa, That's Creepy...

Holy Ships that was creepy O.O
This is gonna sound weird but here's what I thought of:
At the beginning, with that weird droning sound, I thought of some kind of alien, demented, maternity ward. A bunch of mutated infants all wailing in the dark, with some...thing creeping around them. (Like I said its messed up.)
You start to run in panic from teh wailing, and the THING, but it confronts you. You shoot it with something and it crys in pain. Eventually you get outside, and that is when YOU begin to cry out in agony, for you have just seen a world ravaged by unknown beings; post-apocalyptic. You relaize you have been grown in the hellish chamber from whence you came, and you understand that there is no hope for you. Even now you hear them coming...

And there you have it...

[Imploding Forces]

Loop?

Nice job. I liked it. Just one thing though: if you want it to be used as a loop, I'd think about removing the fade in and out from the beginning and end of the piece. That way it would actually loop and it wouldnt keep fading out and in. Just a suggestion anyway. Keep it up!

gamerworld14 responds:

yeah, after i posted this, i noticed that it didn't loop perfectly ... oh well... maybe i will come out with a new version, but i didn't personally like this song as much as my others.

[All Night Party 2 loop]

Smoooth...

Wow, I tink I like htis one even more than the other one! This one just seems smoother. Its less intense and loops a little better than the 1st one. Keep it up!

[All Night Party Loop]

Party...?

I really like this loop! But when I listen to it...Parties just don't come to mind. Not sure what does, but thats not really important. Way to go!

[epic loop]

Very Quiet

I like it! It loops very well; you can't even hear the transition! I have one vice though: Its reeeally quiet. Think you could ramp it up a bit?

e991e responds:

I would but I'm currently using the demo version of FL8 so i can't really go back and change anything.
Just ramp up your speakers ^.^;
Thanks for the review

[-Jumper-]

Kirby?

I could TOTALLY see this in a Kirby game. I dunno why, It just makes me think of kirby :P Nice work!

[Kaiz-I-Call-It-Industry]

Very Good Start

A very good start to what I think could be a great series! One thing though: The kind of scratchy sounds that begin at around 0:33 are a little too loud I think. They blott out the rest of the music. Turn down the volume on those, but other than that I think its great! Keep it up! I can't wait for the full song.

nightsurfermusic responds:

hey cool, thanks :P I like the constructive critism, i'll work on that scratch.

[The New Verago Theme]

OMG I cant wait for your game!

Its a GTA game he's making. And I have to say, the Demo is fuckin' sweet.

[Ambient Evening]

VG Ending?

This brings to mind an ending sequence of an RPG. Could just be me though...

BlazingDragon responds:

I think it would be awesome to write RPG music. It is pretty much my dream, lol.